That is a good point.. when you compare ziti with other tools.. is there something that it does way better.. I am not that familiar with the monitoring capabilities of other tools... only to say from a non tech person.. I would assume it provides me the monitoring I need.
Maybe this is one more
Provides the monitoring you need but didn't know you could have.
Does that sum it up.. can you help me illustrate with a concrete example?
Personally, I think the first two bullets my mother can understand, the last bullet jumps from the "101" (total beginner) level to a "301" (advanced) level. I'd replace it with something more like "Fine-grained access controls allowing control down to individual uses and individual services" or something along those lines. It's longer, but my mother might understand those words better